Proud.

I'm proud this isn't violent garbage. Good jokes, nice art, well done, not evil. I'm pretty sick of seeing nothing but violence and lame death jokes as if its funny on Newgrounds and this is a huge improvement. More personality and less spam. Nice job!

Best jokes..

Flying nazi-ducks and the word 'boogaloo' lol

Chrono Master

Reminds me of an old game called 'Chrono Master' (that' right, Master, not Trigger.) Great use of my song! I'm proud to have it in this thing. :)

Nice

You put a good number of screens in this one. Nice art, good job Mike~

Rating

Hate to do this but you've got the change your rating. Its not E for everyone you were dishonest in the section where you tick off where or not it contains violence because this would get a 'Teen' rating.

There are lots of little kids that would see the first couple of drawings in this game, even in the loading screen, and freak out because of the gore. Sorry dude. But you should change that.

All in all the game is pretty fun, if a bit one dimensional. Cool stuff keep making games! :)

I instantly liked the mix of the instruments and the unique feel of the track. Nice Dub, I also like that you kept up the song progression, without letting it stay the same for longer than 16, which is good practice, up to about the one minute mark. Then I think you repeat. Then a different beat again around 1:30.

The trick with this kind of music is that you have to put as much work into minute two as minute one, and I like that you kept it under two minutes, because the amount of material you have here is just about that much, but I would still put as much work into the second minute as the first, if you know what I mean.

Keep making unique beats, structures, and loops with your instruments, that's the whole trick to this genre of music, and jam pack those minutes with amazing twists and turns.

Overall nice job, really well done.

I would start the song where the beat kicks in. After that it becomes a really cool ambient piece. The reverb of your clap really helps unify the track, adding some space and dimension to the stereo space. A bit more variety would be good, especially at this length.

I would listen to an ambient artist like maybe Ambeam https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nB0_zEBrfn4

You have a style that sort of reflects his so you'd probably like it and could study his song structure.

This isn't quite dubstep, maybe 'rockstep' would be a good word for it. I feel the metal. XD Nice writing, keep practicing mixing and mastering, as well as choosing your instruments. Find some nice free ones on the net.

Thanks for uploading the track.

You got an interesting blurred 'cell' effect on the lines, what did you use to do that?

(Explanation of rating: Drawing is very good, background fits, colors are good and fitting, minus half a star for framing)

Nice line, very cartoony! I feel the color between the background and foreground could be a little more separated if you were curious about the missing star, but overall the linework etc. is bangin. Especially the hyperbolic flowing expressions.

I think

I think you should spend less time thinking about having sex with animals.

You're a really talented artist but this is just sick.

Girls bodies with dog-heads? Its like something out of a nightmare. I'm sorry for this, but it honest.

You're 19, it times to grow up. Sorry to be so harsh cause I really like your art and have nothing against you I'm proud of your talent and I wish you all the best in the world. But seriously.