'Pet'hetic.. har har lol
Good animation,
Nice that you have 'a' story to follow,
Terrible sound.
Terrible Sound .
TERRIBLE SOUND.
So much effort, diminished by 60% for having terrible sound.
Voice acting, not good. SoundFX? They were fine, but cut alot, instead of being smooth. Soundtrack? Not too much music but it seemed alright. Sound quality? Shit. Probably mono too. :( yuk!
Still, not bad for a pilot.
My advice: Try to cut the episode down to make it less boring, JUST the important stuff. Like a good book, in a good animation every scene should have a purpose towards the point/plot, you know what I mean. You could have cut alot of this. Still, it is a valiant effort! :) Cool stuff. Thanks for making it for us!